Use kya, khud ko bhula dunga
Is tufaan ko bujha dunga
Main teri raah mein ab bas
Har ek lamha naya dunga
Mohabbat kya, qayamat kya
Main farq inme mita dunga
Hai darya uske ishare par
To kashti hi duba dunga
Naye rangon ki ek duniya
Siyaah-e-dil se bana dunga
[by Siyaah]
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An earlier attempt at a musalsal ghazal - a somewhat unusual theme and state of being - finally had the courage to post.
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Hai darya uske ishare par
To kashti hi duba dunga!!
Really awesome thought!!
Naye rangon ki ek duniya
Siyaah-e-dil se bana dunga
Superb use of your takhallus...seriously amazing! Fantastic poetry. Sometimes, what we thing is unusual, turns out to be pretty common a theme. Loved every couplet of the gazal and could relate to it. Honestly.
satyaanveshi: welcome...glad you liked it!
tapasya: yes that takhallus part just came about naturally...and true- there is universality in what seems unusual to oneself...
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